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The Boo-Ya! #2: Pages 5-6

Page 5, 6 Panels- Jail Cell, Moltrasio Italy Panel 1: We move to a close-up shot of the Madam and Nessa's faces looking at one another with a raised eyebrow. They're both befuddled by the actions of the lecherous looking local human. The background behind them is a mix of gray and beige coming from the walls of the cell. NESSA [to the Madam, whispering]: Do you know what the hells this pungent ape's saying? THE MADAM [to Nessa, whispering]: No clue...it's probably disappointing though. NESSA [interjecting snarkily, Bubble 2]: Like most males in this galaxy! THE MADAM [chuckle, Bubble 2]: Yeah...how the females on this planet survive is a mystery. They must be miserable! PRISONER #1 [Off-Panel, to the Madam and Nessa]: Ehey, wachuguys tyalkin'-bout?... Panel 2: Action shot taken a couple of seconds later, taking in both the Prisoner and the Madam in the course of the shot (Prisoner #1 on the left of the panel view and Madam on the right). The Madam takes on a softer tone of voice and body language, playing coquettish to the visibly aroused young man as Nessa watches on behind the good captain. THE MADAM [to Prisoner #1, overtly flirtatious]: Your "myacht," you say? Mmmm....how big is it? PRISONER #1 [boastfully, to the Madam]: Oho, iss yugge...more'n uff fer yew 'n yer lovely friend! THE MADAM [Bubble 2]: Mmmm...promising! PRISONER #1 [Bubble 2]: You have no idea... Panel 3-5: A three-part set of panels centered around the two of them moments later as the Madam moves closely to the much shorter human who is absolutely putty in her hands. Her hand slowly moving down the back of his head by the time we reach Panel 3. In Panel 4, she moves the prisoner's head toward her as if to kiss passionately. Then a spilt second later, in Panel 5, the Madam slams her knee into the man's testicles with a brutal, painful "CRUNCH!" that echoes throughout the cell along with a bellowing laugh from Nessa PRISONER #1 [Cont. increasingly aroused, to the Madam; Panel 3]: What's yername, Bella? THE MADAM [to Prisoner #1; Panel 3]: I'm... PRISONER #1 [pained scream; Panel 4]: GAAGHH! THE MADAM [back to normal, with a growl; Panel 4]: Not interested! Panel 6: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A couple of seconds pass by, and the Prisoner has collapsed to the ground in a pool of bloody pain. The Madam looks down at her dirty work, flashing a pleased smile as she wipes off some invisible dust on her shirt. The chuckle from Nessa starts to descend in tone in the background compared to Panel 5. THE MADAM [pondering, to Nessa]: I wonder if they plop out of the mouth once injured. NESSA [Off-Panel, to the Madam]: If what plop out? THE MADAM [Bubble 2]: The human's testicles. I wonder if they plop out like Keelzahnian nuts after you kick them, or if they turn into goo. NESSA [dismissively, Bubble 2]: It wouldn't surprise me if they either one happened, given everything else that flows out of the human body. THE MADAM [chuckling, Bubble 3]: True true... Page 6, 6 Panels- Jail Cell, Moltrasio Italy/ Hallway, the Boo-Ya! Panel 1: We shift the focus slightly to the Madam a single beat later. She slips one of her hands into the pockets of her jeans and walks back toward Nessa's direction. Her body language now fully back to her normal, calm and casual demeanor. In the background, you can see the other prisoners still huddled in the corner of the cell, watching in now confirmed paralyzing fear everything that's taken place. THE MADAM [Cont., to Nessa pointing toward the other prisoners]: Well...looks like the others won't be bothering. Panel 2: Cut to Nessa standing in the same position of the cell that we saw her in in the last panel of the previous page. She raises her right eyebrow in ponderous thought, scratching the base of her head with her left hand. The beige of the bricks is the primary color choice in the background of the panel. NESSA [looking at Prisoner #1 via her periphery, to the Madam]: And looks like nothing's happening to the apes tiny testicles. A bit disappointing. Panel 3-4: A two-part set of panels centered back on the good captain of the Boo-Ya! in the same type of action as before. The background is also similar to what we saw in Panel 1, save for the different parts of the room connected to her movement. In Panel 3, Madam flashes a knowing smile and nods as she responds to her friend's statement. In the next panel, her comm rings, drawing her focus toward her pockets. Also in Panel 4, we see two separate shots of the Madam (representing a couple of seconds in time) as she takes one last step and stops to answer the comm. THE MADAM [knowing, to Nessa; Panel 3]: Yeah... THE MADAM [Cont., Panel 4, Image 1]: Anyway, let's see if the comms on the Boo-Ya! are up and running THE MADAM [to Staehlia, with the comm raised up to chin level; Panel 4, Image & Bubble 2]: Stahl! How goes the break out plan? STAEHLIA [from the comm, to the Madam; Panel 4]: The Hopper is in sight, ma'am... Panel 5: Cut to a proper shot of Staehlia walking with a slight hobble down one of the hallways on the ship in the direction of the aforementioned Hopper. Her comm is raised in roughly the same position that the Madam was in the previous panel. In the background around her, you can see areas of sparks as metal panels reposition themselves and hear the buzz of appropriate electric wires connect back in their regular position courtesy of the Regen. STAEHLIA [Cont.]: But there is an issue with the power and its effect on the ongoing Regen. THE MADAM [from the comm speakers, to Staehlia]: How bad is it? STAEHLIA [Bubble 2]: Well, I... CAPALDI [interjecting from the ship's speakers, Off-Panel]: Ship is now 60% repaired. Tehn horuts till Regen is completed... Panel 6: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. Staehlia looks up toward the ceiling in order to respond to the ship's AI, nodding affirmatively to the statement. Though holding a slight modicum of annoyance at the timing of the response. As was the case in Panel 5, we see the ship continue to spark and repair itself. But in different spots of the ship than before as we see her make the turn toward the left in a second separate image. STAEHLIA [looking up to Capaldi]: Thank you, Capaldi. THE MADAM [from the comm, to Staehlia]: Yeah, thanks... NESSA [interjecting from the comm, readily more annoyed]: This mean we're gonna have to stay in this sad, flarking dump longer than we need? STAEHLIA [mild, quick chuckle; Image/Bubble 2]: Not at all, cap'n...

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