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The Boo-Ya! #8: Pages 17-18

Page 17, 7 Panels- Dr. Arxin's Laboratory, 5 floors beneath the Docking Bay, Mientahl

Panel 1: Cut to an image six feet from the scene of the empty space representing Nessa standing in between a couple of racks of weapons and tech on both sides of the panel view. The one on the left is a row of metal balls of some kind, while the other showcases a row of different kinds of repulsor guns and energy swords.

Panel 2-4: A three-part set of panels that compose a series of action shots of the Killeman through the area in the direction of the ice pahkas, moving from one walkway to another while humming a few bars from "Private Eyes" by Hall & Oates. You can see the ladies off in the left corner of Panels 2 and 3 watching the scene as it goes on before fading from view in Panel 4.

Panel 5: Cut to a side close-up of the empty invisible space representing Nessa a few minuyats later, entering a rack where the ice pahkas can be seen off-panel right. The background behind her shows a row of glass orbs that look a little like snowglobes to the naked eye, though they are in fact much more than that.

NESSA [thought bubble]: Suddenly got colder than a Froheezian's ahnkis...must be close!

Panel 6-7: A two-part set of panels that follows the same setting and layout as the previous panel. With each panel, you can see a little more of the rack of ice pahkas (which resembles a normal looking ice packs that you'd find in any local pharmacy). In Panel 7, they become the primary focus of the background as Nessa stands in front of it.

NESSA [Cont., thought bubble; Panel 6]: Shouldn't be too long till this bett'n test's done. Then we can get to the fun stuff already. NESSA [speaking to Dr. Arxin, Panel 7]: I'm here at the shiny stuff! On a separate note, can I steal a handful of these bad boyos...for the arsenal? DR. ARXIN [Off-Panel, to Nessa; Panel 7]: Not a chance in bett'n hells, chicla!

Page 18, 5 Panels- Dr. Arxin's Laboratory, 5 floors beneath the Docking Bay, Mientahl

Panel 1: Cut to a shot of the good Doctor moving toward the side of the worktable to get a better look, splitting her focus intently between the opened notebook in her hands and the scene taking place. You can see Staehlia moving out of her way at the same moment An'x walks by.

DR. ARXIN [Cont.]: Anyway, how do you feel? Any weird sensations or sentient antibodies floating around near eye level?

Panel 2: We move to a shot from the side of the Killeman a second later. The setting and color scheme reverts to the same setup we saw a few pages ago with her. She glances over in the Doctor's direction with a solid degree of consternation to An'x's stream of questions. Her arm just beginning to extend forward.

NESSA [groans, to Dr. Arxin]: Everything’s fine, Doc. I did see a nest of flying pink heads a minuyat ago, but that's about it...

Panel 3-5: A three-part set of panels that zoom in a little closer on Nessa as she moves her hand bit by bit toward one of the nearby devices located on the rack. In Panel 4, we hear a crackling sound and the sight of a red-blue flicker that represents the visual evidence of the Shboing to the reader. By the time we reach Panel 5 after a handful of seconds, she grabs the edges of the device strongly.

NESSA [deep breath, Panel 3]: Here we go... DR. ARXIN [Off-Panel, Panel 5]: The barrier's been breached!

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