The Boo-Ya! #10: Pages 3-4
- May 5, 2017
- 3 min read
Page 3, 6 Panels- Mar-Vell's, Kos
Panel 1: We move back to a shot of the human back to some semblance of normalcy. She's already taken a swig of the glass of light brown liquid that looks a little like a fizzy Dr. Pepper, regaining her appetite slowly again. Her eyes looking over in the Madam's and Dr. Arxin's direction as she lowers it down on the table again.
ROBIN CARTWRIGHT [Cont., curious to Dr. Arxin]: So...I think you were just about to talk about the plan we spit balled over back in the Mess Hall?
Panel 2: Cut to a shot of the Madam looking on with a deal of surprise at the remark. The background behind her is similar to the last time she popped up in the previous page. You can see the cap'n's mouth is full with a green burger that lies in between a bun whose alternates in swirling, kaleidoscopic colors.
THE MADAM [surprised through full mouth, to Robin]: Whoa, the--the plan came from you?
Panel 3-4: Back to Robin in a similar setting and layout to what we saw a tthe top of the page. In Panel 3, she flashes the Athosian a slightly snarky eyebrow at the level of surprise her statement was given. In the next panel, moments later, our human heroine sweeps the plate off the table with her right hand in the direction of a waste can that has appeared off-panel on the floor waiting for the plate.
ROBIN CARTWRIGHT [to the Madam, defensive of her species; Panel 3]: Yeah. I know my species are primarily knuckle dragging, self-destructive morons. Especially the ones in government. But we can come up with good ideas from time to time. DR. ARXIN [interjecting Off-Panel, Panel 4]: Which this most certainly is.
Panel 5: We shift to a shot of the good Doctor seated next to the Madam. She has a spoon digging into the center of a bowl of purple-red goop that has the same consistency as soup, glancing over to the Athosian with the calm level of someone who has a degree of excitement over what she knows. You can see a medium-sized device with a circular energy center placed next to the bowl.
DR. ARXIN [Cont., to the Madam]: It involves the Arm-or on her wrist. And a little bit of good fortune.
Panel 6: Cut to a close-up on the Madam's face, reacting to the part of the statement with a mix of confusion and a desire to elaborate a little more on the piece of information given. You can partially see Nessa and Ms. Cartwright looking on next to her at the table in the background as she speaks.
THE MADAM [to Dr. Arxin]: And by little, you mean...? DR. ARXIN [Off-Panel]: A large amount of it. THE MADAM [Bubble 2]: Thought so. So...how does this "Arm-or" help? Does it have some mini neutron bombs stored inside or something?
Page 4, 5 Panels- Mar-Vell's, Kos
Panel 1-2: A two-part set of panels that moves back to a shot of the good Doctor a beat later. She appears very enthused by the suggestion in Panel 1, flashing a wide smile. Her right hand is seen reaching over to grab the device on the table as she speaks. In Panel 2, a few moments later, An'x starts typing something into a little 3-D keyboard that appears from the bottom of the device.
DR. ARXIN [shaking her head, but inspired; Panel 1]: Not quite, but...flark me, that's a pretty awesome idea! DR. ARXIN [jotting it down on her comm, to herself; Panel 2]: I should save it for the next-gen Arm-Or. It may mean that'll be a little larger, but it could mean I could ship it to rebel armies or nations... NESSA [Off-Panel, to Dr. Arxin; Panel 2]: Oi, Doc...
Panel 3: Cut to a shot of Nessa, moving her right hand in a circular motion in a universal sign of "Get on with it!" A half-circle of large mugs of alcohol are seen hovering over the top of a grilled square shaped steak, half-eaten.
NESSA [Cont., anxious]: Keep the scirection back in those metal pants, and let's get back to the "pretty awesome idea!"
Panel 4-5: Back to the good Doctor in a similar setting and layout to what we saw at the top of the page. In Panel 4, she nods in acknowledgment, speaking with a big glob of the soup in her mouth. In Panel 5, after swallowing that glob a couple of beats later, An'x starts to recite what they talked about to the seated audience.
DR. ARXIN [apologetically placing the device back on the table, to everyone; Panel 4]: Oh yes...of course, of course. DR. ARXIN [Cont., calmly; Panel 5]: It starts with Robin on the ground in the role of sightseer.
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