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Jones St., Chapter 4: Pages 9-10

Page 9, 6 Panels- MadHouse Coffee, W. Desert Inn Road, Las Vegas NV

Panel 1-2: Cut to Claudia at her seat, first taking a bite of her sandwich with a bright smile on her face; the clipboard is in front of her with the pen lying on top of the scribbled on pieces of paper. In Panel 2, she places the sandwich back on the plate with her other free hand down on the table; the smile settled back to a friendly stoic baseline.

CLAUDIA [to Tara, Panel 2]: When can you start?

Panel 3: Back to Tara on the other side of the table quickly nodding in regards to the question and everything attached to it. Every inch of his body filling up with a great deal of excited energy over this sudden rush of success.

TARA [giddy chuckle, to Claudia]: Uh, as--as soon as you want me to. CLAUDIA [Off-Panel]: Excellent! You have a book you wanted to start with? TARA [Bubble 2]: Well, there's the new Shelley Sackier book, The Freemason's Daughter, that's intriguing to me. Mainly 'cause of the time travel part and the touching romance part. Also, I'm part English as well as part Mexican and a big Anglophile, which includes Scotland and Wales for me, so a book like this is right up my alley...

Panel 4-6: A three-part set of panels that starts off in the same setting and layout as the previous panel. As he talks with her over time without the reader hearing them in Panels 4 and 5, you can see a shadow of Mr. Myers appear to the right side of the panel which appears to be building up to an exclamation of pure and utter joy, which is shown in Panel 6 by him springing toward the sky in a cheerful "YAAAHHHSS!" as he walks out of the coffeehouse a short time later.

Page 10, 6 Panels- MadHouse Coffee, W. Desert Inn Road, Las Vegas NV

Panel 1-3: A three-part set of panels that focuses on the same setting and layout as the last panel of the previous page. In each panel, we see a different action shot of Tara dancing from right to left in an excited foot-heavy dance that looks as if it was taken from the dance scene in A Charlie Brown Christmas Special; his energy bar firmly at 82%, which is where it stays for the rest of the page.

TARA [Panel 1]: Boo-pa-da-gabi.... TARA [Panel 2]: Zippa-La-Ma-Nana... TARA [Panel 3]: Boo-pa-da-gabi...

Panel 4-6: A three-part set of panels that also focuses on the same setting and layout as the first half of the page. In the first couple of panels, it follows the same formula with him dancing and scat singing to himself as people pass by, giving him the "...Weirdo!" look as they enter the coffeehouse. Then, in Panel 6, Tara stops when his phone starts to ring.

TARA [Panel 4]: Zippa-La-Ma-Grahiiina... TARA [Panel 5]: Boo-pa-da-da-gabi Zip-Phloo-Ma--

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