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Golden Gate Comic Con, Chapter 4: Pages 23-24

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INT. HOLDING CELL AREA, SFPD MISSION POLICE STATION- Late Night

PANEL 1: We cut to a similar looking shot that we saw at the end of the previous page, but with a different person involved in the action. You can see behind them in the background part of what appears to be a leather chair that the person is sitting on.

PERSON [moaning]: Mmm...that's it, you mountainous stud of a man!

PANEL 2: Same setting as the previous panel, but with a layout that pulls out more compared to Panel 1. As a result, we see the person is in fact an Officer seated behind a front desk; the logo of the San Francisco Police Department visible behind him in the background. You can see the officer has male characteristics with a badge that reads "KOVACS"; his arms and hands moving down and around as if caressing someone.

OFFICER KOVACS [Cont.]: Mmm--No, a little more to the left. The left...that's it! That's it, Daddy. That's--

PANEL 3: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A few moments later, we see Officer Kovacs orgasming amongst a flurry of passionate energy going through his body; his back craning up slightly from the leather chair at the same moment.

MICHELE [narration caption]: That could be me right now. Not with him, of course...not my type (nor am I probably his, judging by the love mumbling he's doing).

PANEL 4: Cut to a shot of Michele seated on a bench inside one of the holding cells next to the officer's front desk. She has her head leaning against the gray brick wall of the aforementioned cell, watching something on a screen off-panel in front of her.

MICHELE [Cont. narration caption]: Instead? I chose to sock Harvey Weinstein's bastard son in the jaw, and break his wrist for trying to sleep with me. MICHELE [narration caption 2]: Yes, it cost me some money and I lost out on some networking. But would I do it again? Hells yes, I would...not like it's the first time that's happened!

PANEL 5: A two-part action shot, placed next to her head in the previous pane, that moves back to the snazzy schmoozing function that she was in earlier in the chapter. One part shows her clocking the Golden Calf in the right side of his jaw, and the other part shows her snapping his right wrist.

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INT. MICHELE'S CELL- Half Hour Later

PANEL 1: Same setting/layout as Panel 4 of the previous page. As she waits patiently, watching whatever is taking place off-panel in front of her, you can hear a little "DING!" pop up via Lil' Jarvis from the lower right corner of the panel view.

CAPTION: Half Hour Later LIL JARVIS [to Michele]: The Dash Cash payment has gone through, Miss. Your release should be occurring momentarily. MICHELE [happy, to Lil Jarvis]: Nifty...

PANEL 2: Action shot of Ms. McKinney shifting her body slightly into more of a resting pose on her side. She glances down in the direction of her wrist comm to properly speak to her prosthetic-based A.I. buddy. You can see a little more of the floor of the cell in the bottom of the panel view alongside the wall immediately behind her.

LIL JARVIS [Cont.]: Unfortunately, this brouhaha means you won't be able to afford Valkyrie's armor at the End of Con auction. MICHELE [no regrets]: That sucks, but given the fact he was trying to slip his hand down my pants...still worth it! LIL JARVIS [Bubble 2]: Never said it wasn't. Just presenting the facts as they are.

PANEL 3: Slight close-up on Michele a few moments later. An idea pops into her head after the brief pause in action, shifting things back to the business at hand. You can see a section of the wall immediately behind her in the background.

MICHELE: I'm starting to get hungry. Are there any good Curry places nearby, or at least a spicy curry burrito? LIL JARVIS [Off-Panel]: There is one a few blocks from here, but I would recommend heading to the hotel room ASAP. Tomorrow is your yearly "Special Relationship" date with Ms. Jennifer Marcus. MICHELE [remembering, Bubble 2]: Ah yes, Jenny...the lone bright spot in this shit stain of a country!

PANEL 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel, along with the same background behind her. A few beats later, you can see the smile stay over her face as a result of the last quote from Panel 3.

MICHELE [Cont.]: Everything set up for tomorrow? LIL JARVIS [Off-Panel]: Yes, Miss...

PANEL 5-7: A three-part set of panels that focus on different exterior shots of the location where their date will be taking place. In Panel 5, it's a shot of a movie theater with "New X Marathon" on the marquee. In Panel 6, it's an interior shot of a busy cafe serving different kinds of food to the patrons inside. Then in Panel 7, it moves to an exterior shot of an outdoor concert located in a park somewhere.

LIL JARVIS [Cont., caption; Panel 5]: There's the New-X Marathon taking place at the Cinemark Mission, starting at 8 A.M. Tickets are saved up for all 5 movies in concurrent order. LIL JARVIS [caption, Panel 6]: Reservations for your usual restaurant, La Dulce Casa, are set for 6 P.M. LIL JARVIS [caption, Panel 7]: And the Free concert with the Dapardi B's and the Women of Neverwhere is still set for 8 P.M., barring weather or technical--

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