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Rock The Vouhhnn!, Chapter 1: Part 2.2

  • Oct 10, 2019
  • 3 min read

Page 9 Panel 1: Then back to the boss from the commercial (Panel 3 of the previous page) staring directly to camera to say one thing. FESTIVAL BOSS (ecstatic)

Thank you, Z-Farms! Panel 2: We then move to the end of the commercial, showing the Z-Farms logo below a map of the United States which is same as we know, except for blacked out areas in the Northeast and South as well as the Midwest. On the map, you can see a series of dots where each individual Farm is located; mostly in the East Coast and Mountain West areas- in a smattering of big and small cities- with a few points Northwest and West, including Los Angeles. Panel 3: Same image as the previous panel, though the layout has widened slightly to take in a section of a white wall as well as part of a fence divider in the lower half of the panel. Panel 4: Cut to a shot in the early afternoon of Madison seated at a corner table in a casual, fairly busy restaurant. She's dressed in a nice navy blue suit coat with a matching colored T-shirt over it; a cup of coffee on the table in front of her. Caption: Whisky's, Downtown Lawrenceburg- A Few Days Later Panel 5: Action shot of the front entrance of an older man- JAMES BROCK walking inside a minute later. He's dressed in a bespoke black suit with a plaid tie; his face seemingly built from a template of what, in some limited thinking eyes, a politician should look like. Caption: James Brock: 8-Term Indiana State Representative (G-District 17). Page 10 Panel 1: We move to an action shot a few moments later showing Madison and the man shaking hands at the table, which is partially visible in the lower portion of the panel view. MADISON

(courteous, to James)

Thanks for coming down, Uncle Brock. I know you're still in session at the moment. JAMES

(half grin, to Madison)

Anything to help out the daughter of a friend from the Front, Maddie. Panel 2: Cut to a shot of James just as he takes his seat on one of the chairs a few moments later. JAMES

(Cont.)

You ordered anything yet? Panel 3: We move to a similarly framed shot of Madison a second later, though she's already taken her seat at this point. MADISON

(shakes her head)

I got here about ten minutes ago. Besides, I'm still powering on the Rockstar and breakfast burrito from the AM-PM this morning.

MADISON

(reacting to Panel 4, Bubble 1)

Good, good. Still keeping my head above water. Panel 4: Cut to a shot of the two at the table a moment later, following along on the nice bit of conversation continued on from the previous couple of panels. JAMES

(slight chuckle)

Ah, the Breakfast of Poor Staffers...I don't miss that life! So, how've you been? How's the county office?

JAMES

(reacting to Panel 3, Bubble 2)

As we all...you were over in D.C. with DNC, last I heard. What happened with that?

Panel 5: We shift to a close-up on Madison a few moments later, tightly gripping the sides of the menu as she speaks about what happened.

MADISON

(chipper masking rage)

A male staffer got handsy one day, and I got punchy in response. When I tried to report him, I...promptly had a meltdown and they chucked me on my ass. With a smile.

JAMES

(Off-Panel)

Didn't they know about your ASD?

MADISON

They did. But canning someone on the spectrum's still kosher in this country. I know- I double checked!

JAMES

(Off-Panel)

Ah...sorry to hear that. You're destined for bigger things than that- I can feel it.

MADISON

Thanks...

Panel 6: We move to a close-up shot of Mr. Brock a few moments later in the same setting and layout as Panel 4 of the previous page; his eyes focused squarely on Madison with a serious look on his face, while his hand reaches out to the menu located panel right. JAMES

So, what's the LT up to these days?

Panel 7: Back to Madison in the same setting/layout as Panel 5 of the previous page. She grins at the question, letting out a little sliver of a smile as she speaks.

MADISON

He's good. Still on his yacht, somewhere in South America I think.

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