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Rock The Vouhhhnn!, Chapter 4: Part 2.2

Page 87

Panel 1: Cut to a shot of the folder sprawled out a few moments later. You can see a series of complaint forms and photos of her taken at different points throughout the fledgling campaign.

Caption: (from Darren) "There's the lighting changes you suggested to the crew at that rally in Lawrenceburg which made him look like a rotten advocado."

Caption: (Cont., from Darren) "There's the 20 different E-Mails you sent Duncan with 'suggestions' to create a policy on Consensual Sex Trade, against the wishes of the party."

Caption: (Cont., from Darren) "There's the three Senior Staff meetings that you somehow 'accidentally' barged into, suggesting a more proactive campaign structure, even though you don't have the clearance or seniority to say such a thing."

Panel 2: We move to a shot of the man at the end of his long explanation; his hands touching the documents at the top of the table.

DARREN

(stern, to Madison)

And then of course, there's the harassment of the speechwriting staff to help promote this Democratic Socialist policy structure you'd been gunning for. I gave you a little rope, hoping it might shut you up, and you still somehow--

Panel 3: Cut to a shot of Ms. Mitchell's face, glancing down at the table with a look of melancholy as she pictures what she thinks is coming next.

MADISON

(to Darren)

I know, I know. And I'm thankful for the shot you gave me, but right in the moment...

Panel 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A second later, she looks back up at Darren with a spark of assured defiance that swells up with each word out of her mouth.

MADISON

(Cont.)

I felt it was what this campaign needed- a ballsy, out of the box move. If it means you can me because of that call, I'm perfectly okay with it--

Panel 5: Action shot of an intern bursting through the door to the conference room. They have an excitable look on their face, as if they'd seen something exciting just moments before.

INTERN 3

(to Darren)

Something interesting just hit the Herald-Tribune homepage.

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Panel 1: Cut to a shot of the intern's computer screen, which is blank as if it's reloading the page. You can see the homepage for the Lawrenceburg Herald-Tribune at the top (http://www.lhtnews.com) and the blue loading bar just below it.

Panel 2: We move to a shot of the Intern, Darren and Madison watching the screen a split second later. You can see a little section of the bullpen in the background.

INTERN 3

(apologetically, to Darren)

Sorry, boss. I think the site has one of those auto refresh deals- in case of breaking news.

DARREN

(annoyed but understanding, to Intern 3)

I'm well aware of the Ticks, and couldn't care less. Just as long as this news you're promising is as big as you say it--

Panel 3: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. Darren's train of thought derails a split second later as the group sees the headline in question. There's a collective look of shock and excitement regarding what they're seeing.

DARREN

(mouth agape)

Holy. It!

Panel 4: We move to a close-up of a widely grinning Ms. Mitchell over the course of a few moments; the layout of the panel colored over by a filter called ITV (Inner Thoughts Vision).

Panel 5: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. She pumps her fist to the sky, letting out a joyous exclamation.

MADISON

(singsongy)

Vin-di-CATION!

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