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Rock The Vouhhhnn!, Chapter 6: Part 2.1

Page 135 (Chapter 6, Page 7)

Panel 1: Back in the green room following the press conference. Zoe is standing behind Mr. Skelton’s cage, putting on a large pair of heavy gloves in order to push it out of the building soon; her eyes glancing leftward as Madison is pacing off-panel.

ZOE

(Cont., to Madison) It’s just a bad stroke of luck. One that takes a bit of air out of our sails, sure, but- there’s a way to minimize the damage.

Panel 2: Cut to a shot of Ms. Mitchell in mid-stride, glancing over at Ms. Olson with an incredulous look on her face; her body also turning as if about to make the same movement in the opposite direction.

MADISON

You saw the same thing I did, right?

Panel 3: Flashback to the press conference, centered on Henry answering a question that came moments before. You can see the speaker used to address people positioned directly at the microphone on the podium.

HENRY (to the Reporter, from the speaker)

What happened to Franny Tate and Tina Welch is an absolute tragedy. An unfortunate, unlucky incident where a million things had to go wrong to occur. To think a similar incident could happen with me on the trail, given the tight security protocols we’ve followed since the very beginning, is something that I can’t be--

Panel 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel, completing the flashback two-fer. At the beginning of the speech bubble, you can see the crackle of electronic disruption connected to some type of tech issue.

HENRY (singing-ish, from the speaker) Can’t believe it’s happening to me

Some people wait a lifetime…

For a moment like this!

Panel 5: Back to Zoe in the same setting/layout as Panel 1. She nods in partial acknowledgment to her main point, though still displaying a tone of optimism in terms of the bigger message.

ZOE Yeah, your Pandora seeping onto the Z’s main speaker is a bit embarrassing. But nothing more than an online fail video. Besides, you gave a really great answer on infrastructure that I think I can carve into an ad.

Page 136 (Chapter 6, Page 8)

Panel 1: Cut to Madison on the other side of the room. She’s stopped pacing and is looking up at the ceiling, pondering precisely what her friend was talking about at the end of the previous page.

MADISON Really? I can’t remember which one that was…

Panel 2: Back to Zoe who shrugs in regards to the manner of the answer; her right hand already gripping one of the bars while the left one is raised to grip another on the corresponding side.

ZOE

No worries, I caught a vid of it on my phone. I’ll show it to you once we get back to HQ.

Panel 3: We jump to a shot of Capt. Rogers poking her head in from the door in order to address the two of them. You can see part of the crowd outside in the background as well as some phone flash bulbs.

CAPT. ROGERS

(corrective, to Zoe and Madison) Actually, before you return to HQ, you’re set to film the campaign’s introductory online ad at 2:45.

Panel 4: Action shot of Ms. Olson moving towards the door, glancing off-panel right at the good Captain with a look of inspiration on her face.

ZOE

(to Capt. Rogers) Right, right- “Zeboot 2.0.” I almost forgot.

MADISON (Off-Panel)

We could always look through it tomorrow. The schedule’s clean then, right?

ZOE

(Bubble 2, to Madison) Yeah, it is. Kinda connects to the ad’s big overall theme anyway.

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