Rock The Vouhhhnn!, Chapter 6: Part 3.3

Page 145 (Chapter 6, Page 17)

Panel 1: Madison chuckles after a few extra moments with a full ear-to-ear smile on her face. She sways side to side in a dancing mood to celebrate the moment.

MADISON

500,000 views...by Mazie herself- 500,000!

Panel 2: We move to Ms. Olson in an action shot, quickly moving behind the couch to grab something from the coffee table.

ZOE

I’ll be damned! I’ll check the Slack, see if the good fortune’s found its way to our bank account.

Panel 3: A minute later, we see the woman walking back toward Madison’s direction glancing at the screen. Her amazement is on full display watching the numbers change on the phone screen.

ZOE

(Cont.)

$53,000 and growing. This type of cash, we can finally start to get a GOTV outfit together. Maybe fill out an actual comms team behind me that I can--

Panel 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. She stops walking a beat after the words from Panel 3 exit her mouth, glancing back up at Ms. Mitchell fueled by a moment of concern that hit her just that moment.

ZOE

Crap! Something just dawned on me. The Jenkins campaign might have slipped a Trojan horse amidst all these new donations.

Panel 5: Madison nods affirmatively at the statement, dropping down to sit in front of her tablet once again.

MADISON

Good point. That actually happened once in a Senate race a few years back- can’t remember where.

Page 146 (Chapter 6, Page 18)

Panel 1: We move back to Zoe pacing along the side of the table, glancing at the phone and carefully going through the data on her phone. Madison, meanwhile, is checking her E-Mail on her tablet.

Caption Half Hour Later

ZOE

Looks clean- nothing janky or weird in the data.

MADISON

Yet you don’t sound that relieved, Zo.

Panel 2: Slight close-up on Zoe’s face a moment later, glancing over at Ms. Mitchell quizzically at her statement. You can see a section of the wall and part of a window in the distance in the background.

ZOE

And you know this…?

Panel 3: We move back to Madison at her chair still on the tablet. In this first part, she glances peripherally up toward her friend’s direction in order to answer the question.

MADISON

I’ve been teaching myself body language and vocal cues since I was in middle school. Didn’t take much time to spot the trouble you’re going through.

Panel 4: Back to Zoe in the same setting/layout as Panel 2. She has a slightly skeptical look on her face in terms of Madison’s greater explanation.

ZOE

You know that stuff isn’t an accurate barometer of humans most times.

Panel 5: Back to Madison in a two-part set of panels; the same setting/layout as Panel 3. In the first panel, she grins and chuckles slightly at her friend’s statement from the previous panel.

MADISON

Never said it was. It’s just...helpful.

Panel 6: In the second part, the young woman turns back to the tablet screen. In particular, a notification that catches her eye; her face settling into a basic posture.

MADISON

(Cont.)

Oh, balls. Forgot that was today.