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Rock The Vouhhhnn!, Chapter 7: Part 3.1

Page 165 (Chapter 7, Page 13)

Panel 1: Same setting/layout as the last panel of the previous page. The suggestion settles in with her after a few extra beats of thought; her hand from before is back down to her side.

ZOE

If--When the press start laying in to us about this, can you actually prove they were stingy on the info?

Panel 2: A two-part set of panels that moves back to Ms. Mitchell at the couch. In the first part, the young woman thinks over the question without a great deal of strength one way or another in terms of an answer.

MADISON

I...think I can. I didn’t chuck it after I got back home from the...

Panel 3: In part 2, the final piece of the puzzle hits like a jolt of lightning. As she speaks, her left hand is grabbing the tablet to place it on the couch cushion next to her.

MADISON

(Cont.)

The box tote!

Panel 4: Cut to an action shot of Madison a short time later going through files located in a tote bag shaped like a box. You can partially see the design of the bag itself, which consists of a stylized painting of Nationals Park.

Caption (Zoe)

“You keep your important files in a box tote? You do know Dropbox still exists, right?”

Panel 5: We move back to an action shot of Madison walking and talking in front of her bedroom, glancing over at Zoe who happens to be standing at the opposite side of the room at this moment.

MADISON

This is a whole lot safer than hoping tech companies can stay two steps ahead of hackers. Even if they got this far, they’d be drawn back by the special blend of almonds and rhin cra--

Panel 6: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. Madison stops a moment later, finding a particular document in the folder that elicits a relieved reaction on her face.

MADISON

There we go!

Page 166 (Chapter 7, Page 14)

Panel 1: Action shot of Ms. Mitchell gently tossing the folder back into the tote box, walking back out of the room; the glow of the ceiling lamp very partially hitting her face and the left side of her body.

MADISON

Let’s pump out a quick statement, get it to some friendly media. Hopefully we can get this out in time to…

Panel 2: Cut to a sizable city maze, acting as a montage for their search. You can see a photo of them as they both step out of the door of their apartment/HQ; a series of dashes moving down and around corners of the maze in the direction of the bright neon finish line on the other side. The dashes end, though, after a short distance with a “SCREECHH!” that stretches down to the bottom of the panel.

Panel 3: Placed next to the “SCREECHH!” from the previous panel is a screenshot of Darlene on a staged set, dressed in a formal black dress with an appropriate amount of makeup for a TV interview.

DARLENE

(emotional, mid-sentence)

“...I knew that little--Pardon my French--scumbag was not to be trusted. But I trusted my daughter. I hoped against all hope she wasn’t making a mistake. And, well…!”

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