Rock The Vouhhhnn!, Chapter 9: Part 2.3
Page 212 (Chapter 9, Page 11)
Panel 1: Action shot of Madison taking the first few strides onto the fake grass toward her ball, looking over with a genuinely straight faced expression on her face; the notes from her headphones flowing out of the respective speakers as she speaks.
MADISON
Don’t think so. It was probably just a freaky bump- “course gremlins,” my dad called them.
MADISON
(Bubble 2, confused; reacting to Panel 2, Bubble 1)
Huh…?
Panel 2: Back to Ms. Olson a beat later, letting out a brief chuckle at the rest of the response. As she speaks, you can see her start to turn her body toward the ball in order to make her next shot.
ZOE
(wittily)
I believe the term is Lilliputians.
ZOE
(Bubble 2; reacting to Panel 1, Bubble 2)
Wasn’t a “Gravity Falls” fan growing up- good to know...
Panel 3: In between the 17th and 18th holes, we see the two of them walking side by side having a little bit of a chat; the music still playing on her headphones. You can see the full slice of night sky coming into view on the top half of the panel view, along with the back half of a food cart rolling by to the left of the panel view.
ZOE
(curious)
So, almost done- how’s the noggin? The answer popping up yet?
MADISON
Part of it. Enough that I can...
Panel 4: Slight close-up on Ms. Mitchell a moment later, frozen in place and flashing a distressed and queasy look on her face as some type of mystery malady hits her. You can see a little bit of Zoe’s lower body to the right of the panel view.
Page 213 (Chapter 9, Page 12)
Panel 1: A few moments later, we see Zoe back alongside her friend helping to prop her back up to her feet. You can see Madison slowly trying to get her head back in balance as she speaks.
ZOE
(worried)
What’s wrong?
MADISON
(strained)
That cart we just passed…
ZOE
(Bubble 2)
What?
Panel 2: Cut to a shot of the cart in action that we partially saw back in the previous page. The cart serves a variety of Indian food and drinks that skew both Indian and U.S.
Caption
(Madison)
A big waft of spicy curry that hit me just now. It’s one of those aromas that...hit me like an anvil...
Panel 3: Back to the two of them in the same setting/layout as Panel 1. You can see Madison regaining a little more balance as she speaks. They take a few steps forward on the sidewalk as they chat.
ZOE
(a bit surprised) Oh wow, I--I didn’t know you were sensitive to that.
MADISON
It’s something I usually have a handle on. No need to beat yourself up. I...just got unlucky here.
ZOE
(Bubble 2)
Ah. You want to wrap the game early? You’re already up by 7 strokes.
Panel 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. Madison emphatically shakes her head at the question, using the club to straighten herself out. You can see Zoe pull away slightly, though still having her hand gracing the top of Ms. Mitchell’s shoulder.
MADISON
I’ll be fine enough to finish things. After that…
Panel 5: Cut to the two of them at the diner inside Lil Duffers holding respective milkshakes in their hands. You can see the menu of regular diner items in the top half of the panel view, along with a small smattering of food service workers in the immediate background.
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(Cont., Madison)
We’re gonna need milkshakes. Big time.