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The Community, Issue 1: Part 1.1

Page 1

Panel 1: The morning sun drifts into the room from off-panel left, hitting the face of SEANNA WATKINS. At this moment, an alarm blares in waking them up at this point.

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Seanna Watkins' Bedroom, downtown Sacramento: 5/3/2020

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(Seanna)

"I've had a strong love-hate relationship with Dr. Manhattan from pretty much the first moment I read Watchmen."

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(Cont., Seanna)

"On one side, there's the really cool superpowers and the immortality thing: all which I'd love to have."

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(Cont., Seanna)

"Also the feeling of otherness being genderfluid and asexual. Not to mention the detached observation of humanity, which- same (though not as reflexively pessimistic)."

Panel 2: Action shot of Seanna a short time later, searching through his closet for his uniform; the weariness of slumber still hanging around the edges of their eyes.

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(Cont., Seanna)

"On the other hand, he's also a thoroughly inconsiderate jerk devoid of any semblance of creativity with a not-so-great track record with women to boot."

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(Cont., Seanna)

"Whether it's cheating on his wife with a teenage girl for the crime of getting old. Or killing a pregnant woman in Vietnam for no real reason. Or basically raping his girlfriend using clones."

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(Cont., Seanna)

"Don't get me started about Ozymandias. The whole of his timeline stretched before him, and he couldn't sense something off earlier with that semi-competent Elon Musk?"

Panel 3: Cut to a stylized flashback of Ozymandias being 'ported in a light blue flash of energy, coinciding with Seanna's monologue.

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(Cont., Seanna)

"If I were him, I'd have dumped ol' Ozzy on Pluto the moment I saw him in that Minutemen meeting- timeline and storyline be damned!"

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(Cont., Seanna)

"Anyway...these days, it's firmly in the love column- particularly his powers."

Panel 4: After going through the shower, we see Watkins at a dinner table quickly eating breakfast and watching TV. They're mixed race with long blonde hair and blue eyes and masculine facial features. They're wearing a dark long sleeved shirt; the logo of the supermarket barely visible on their chest next to the two necklaces they're wearing. You can see a little section of the kitchen behind them in the background.

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(Cont., Seanna)

"The ability to teleport back and forth from work without dealing with people...never gonna stop being appealing."

Panel 5: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A few moments later, they turn toward the right upon hearing someone calling to them.

ANNA

(Off-Panel)

Your mask's ready, hon...

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(Cont., Seanna)

"And I can help my mom out by materializing gold out of thin air."

Panel 6: Cut to a shot of ANNA, Seanna's mother [early 50s, female, white, average build], standing a distance from them. She's moving over to her office as she speaks.

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(Cont., Seanna)

"She's done enough for me since my dad died as a baby, making sure we had a decent home and food in our stomach."

ANNA

(Cont., to Seanna)

I left it on the hook next to the door.

SEANNA

(Off-Panel)

Thanks, Mom...

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(Seanna)

"A nice dream, to be sure. Unfortunately, it's not my life at the moment. That is work and online school stuff and...trying not to die of a brand new, deadly virus."

Page 2

Panel 1: Action shot minutes later of Seanna with his big dark blue purse walking through the walkway on a bus, looking around for a seat; their mask over their face- the SHIELD logo painted with Asexual Pride colors.

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(Cont., Seanna narrating)

"All while keeping a strong faith in humanity."

SEANNA

(thought bubble)

Whoever's up there right now, please keep the stupid away.

Panel 2: Cut to a shot from their POV of the passengers inside the bus- a mix of races, genders, and body types where mask wearing is roughly about half.

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(Cont., Seanna thought bubble)

"My head's pounding, and I don't really have the patience for it here."

Panel 3: A two-part set of panels that moves back to Seanna approaching the midway part of the bus. You can see them clutching the strap on his purse as they walk; a look of cautious relief on their face.

SEANNA

(thought bubble)

Yay! Now, for a little Pandora--

Panel 4: In the second part, a few moments later, a statement coming from the off-panel left section elicits a pained grimace on the young person's face.

PASSENGER

(Off-Panel, to Seanna)

Nice bag, fag!

SEANNA

(thought bubble)

Spoke too soon...!

Panel 5: A few moments later, they sit down at an empty seat away from the jerky passenger. You can see a section of the city slowly starting to move as the bus revs back up again.

SEANNA

(thought bubble)

I'm not sure what's sadder- the dated slur, or the fact he probably thought--

Panel 6: Cut to a stylized shot of the passenger a few moments after making his comment in Panel 4. He's a stubbled maskless douchebro with jeans and a tanktop that reads "The Virus is a Plot to make the world gay"

PASSENGER

(proud of himself)

I'M A GENIUS!

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(Seanna)

"Whatever it is..."

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