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Old Scars, Chapter 3: Part 2.2

Page 57 Panel 1: Action shot of the full group a short time later heading out the hallway near the entrance to the cells.


EVA

(with curiosity, to Grem; translated from Russian) What about the other prisoners? Shouldn't we try to free them too?


SYM

(translated for Grem) Eva asks if we shouldn't go back to try to free the others.


GREM

(half grin, and a slight nod) I like how she thinks...I haven't forgotten of them in the slightest.


Panel 2: Slight close-up on Mr. Allen a beat later, patting with his left hand his portable toolkit strapped to his hip as he speaks.


GREM

(Cont.) I left a wee something inside that should help pave the way for 'em.


Panel 3: Flashing back to the cell doors, we see a small battery left on the ground next to a row of prison doors in the background of the shot.


Caption

(Cont., Grem)

"I never dare leave a innocent soul behind if I can..."


Panel 4: Back to the group in the same setting/layout as Panel 1. They're stopped in mid-stride a few moments later by the clicks of multiple guns ready to fire at them. You can see Eva start to break toward the front of the group.


SYM

(whispers, to Grem) Maybe you should have kept a little of that for us, Mr. Allen.


GREM

Aye...


EVA

(with purpose) I have an idea


Panel 5: Slight close-up on Eva a split second after reaching the front of the line; a purple glow emanating from her palm in regards to something big about to happen.


DIMITRI

(Off-Panel, to Eva; translated from Russian) Eva, WAIT...!

Page 58


Panel 1: Cut to a shot of a sidewalk three blocks away from the precinct, which is partially visible in the background of the shot. We see the four of them start to materialize from the teleporting bubble Eva summoned.


Panel 2: Slight close-up on Grem and Eva; the former moving toward the teenaged child with a sense of respect and partial amazement at the act.


GREM

(to Eva, grinning ear to ear) Well bloody done, my dear! Did you learn to do all that, or was it passed down from a relative?


EVA

(half chuckle, to Grem) My...matre.


SYM

(Off-Panel, to Grem) Mother.


GREM

(Bubble 2) Ah- makes perfect sense.


Panel 3: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. We see Mr. Allen slide in a few moments later, helping to keep the young faeman upright after befallen by a fainting spell.


GREM

I gotcha, E!


Panel 4: Action shot of him a second later, reaching into his bag as he addresses the rest of the group with the rest of his thought.


GREM

(Cont.) You've done plenty to save our bacon here.​


Panel 5: A short time later, we see the Emerald Isle unfurled in all its glory across from where they happened to have been standing. Off-panel, you can hear a muddled "BOOM!" coming from the cell area back in the precinct.


Caption

(Cont., Grem)

"High time you all return to the peaceful slumber of home!"

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