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Old Scars, Chapter 6: Part 2.3

Page 133 Panel 1: Action shot of the young person flying through the air, screaming partly due to shock and partly to let out the rush of adrenaline through their entire body.


Panel 2: We see T's shadow glide above the Timmi a short time later, and then pass it on its way back down to the ground.


T

Holy hells- this might actually work. This might...


T

(Bubble 2) ...Spoke too soon!


Panel 3: T crashes down on the snow to the side of the road; a rush of white shooting upward, concealing their position as they roll around and brunt the impact.


Panel 4: Moments later, sore but still upright for the most part, the young person is back on their feet and hobbling back to the Timmi.


Caption

(Louhi)

"You have fought well, Mr. Allen. You have a great deal of heart...you should be proud of that."


Panel 5: Action shot of T a few moments later, taken from behind, as they near to within a few feet from the driver's side door.


Caption

(Cont., Louhi)

"But I think we have an idea how this will end, do we not?"

Page 134


Panel 1: Cut to a shot of the sorceress standing on the pitch a beat after her statement at the end of the previous page. You can see each of her players behind her, standing with chests out and flashing the same type of attitude as the captain. In the corner of the panel is the score: "Team Louhi 9, Team Grem 8."


Panel 2: Grem looks on at his opponent, sore and bloodied and dripping with sweat. But still with his regular baseline of bravado in the face of the whole thing; his hand reaching into his right pants pocket as he speaks. In the lower center section of the panel is the ball, lying undisturbed through all this.


GREM

(quick nod, to Louhi) Cheers. It would seem that way. But as the Bard so beautifully and succinctly put it, "When there's a will..."


Panel 3: Action shot of Mr. Allen moments later shooting a small golf ball on the ground just next to the usual Hurler ball (which remains untouched...for the moment).


Panel 4: A shot taken from the sky showing half of Louhi's end of the pitch; the ball bouncing off each of the players, shocking and subsequently knocking them out.


Panel 5: Same section of time as Panels 4 and 6. As the action goes on, we see another streak representing the actual regulation ball moving at a good speed directly toward the goal.


Panel 6: The other half of the pitch we saw in Panel 4, showing the same ricochet and disruptive effects from the players on that part of the field.


Panel 7: Finally, the end result of all this: the ball hitting the back of the net as the knocked out goalie lies at the bottom of the panel view. The scoreboard reads: "Team Grem 9, Team Louhi 9."

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