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The Community, Issue 10: Part 4.2

Page 254 Panel 1: On the eighth floor, we see the young South African quickly buzzing by each individual door in search of her friend; the aforementioned 8th door partially visible far in the distance of the shot.


Panel 2: Just as she's about to reach said door, it blasts forward and apart as if someone smashed it off its hinges. You can see Ms. Letesha frantically stopping; both feet acting as a steady break on the carpeted floor.


Panel 3: Cut to a shot of Amelia walking out through the doorway, holding parts of the broken chair in both hands. You can see dried blood and patches of purple throughout her face as well as her midsection, exposed by her torn shirt.


WINNIE

(Off-Panel, to Amelia) Fokken hel...Amelia!


Panel 4: A two-part set of panels that starts with Winnie giving Amelia a big hug, eliciting a whimper of pain from the latter.


Panel 5: In the second part, the two of them break away. You can see a concerned look on Ms. Letesha's face to her friend.


WINNIE

(Cont., concerned) Oh sorry...just got a little excited! You okay?


AMELIA

(nods, to Winnie) Where's Celia?


WINNIE

(Bubble 2) A few floors down from here, in a big fight with a pale ass Chris Hemsworth dude named Prime.


AMELIA

(Bubble 2) Met him...would love to jam a few thousand volts right up its--


Panel 6: As Amelia takes a step forward, a jolt of pain comes in to stop her progress. You can see Winnie next to her making sure she remains upright.


WINNIE

As do I. But the job right now is escape. Celia will handle the creepy bot.


AMELIA

(pained) Who's handling...the escape?!

Page 255


Panel 1: Cut to a shot of Seanna back on the rooftop that we last left them. As they wait for the signal to bring in the extraction, you can hear a chirping sound coming from a walkie talkie.


Caption

(Winnie)

"That would be the third member of our rescue team."


Panel 2: A few moments later, Watkins answers the walkie; the binoculars partially visible to their side.


WINNIE

(from the speaker, to Seanna) Hey, I got Amelia. We need a way out now.


SEANNA

(pleased, to Winnie) Great! Where's Celia?


WINNIE

(Bubble 2) Still deep in the thick of it with some mega merc responsible for the kidnapping- Prime.


SEANNA

(Bubble 2) Dumb name...


Panel 3: Action shot of Ms. Letesha in the same spot, pacing over to the right of the panel view. You can see Amelia standing closer to the left.


WINNIE

(chuckles) Don't I know it!


SEANNA

(from the speaker) Any requests...?


AMELIA

Big and fast, and crashy if you can muster it.


SEANNA

(Bubble 2, from the speaker) I like how you think, Amelia!


Panel 4: A two-part set of panels that happens a few beats after their call with Winnie ends; a little "BUZZ!" cropping from its speaker. In the first part, the young person glances out off-panel right in thought.


SEANNA

(Cont., pondering) Big and fast...and crashy. A lot of contenders- hard to choose...


Panel 5: In the second part, a short time later, a bright idea pops into their head; a wide smile over their face corresponding to it.


SEANNA

(inspired) Ooo! I like that one...


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