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The Community, Issue 11: Part 1.2

Page 260 Panel 1: Ms. Gupta brightens up slightly upon hearing the detail, intrigued by the prospect, though still holds a touch of the apprehension from Panel 4 of the previous page.


JESMINDER

(to Amelia)

Hmm...and this isn't the prelude to a trap. 'Cause it feels like the prelude to a trap.


Panel 2: Back to Amelia; the same setting/layout as the end of the previous page. She hems and haws at the question, partially agreeing to it as she reaches into her pocket to pull something out.


AMELIA

(reassuring, to Jesminder) I can see how you'd think that. But it's not a trap. In fact, we're quite familiar


Panel 3: Same setting as the previous panel. The layout widens a little bit to show her holding a phone in both hands. In the middle of the screen, we see Yo-Yo on the screen waving to the group.


YO-YO

Hello everyone.


Panel 4: Cut to Jes taking a few steps forward toward the screen, looking squarely at it with a friendly grin and inquisitive look in her eye.


JESMINDER

(to Yo-Yo) Good to see you, Yo-Yo.


JESMINDER

(Bubble 2; reacting to Panel 5, Bubble 1) How'd you find out about Nuevo Roma?


Panel 5: Slight close-up on Yo-Yo a beat later, glancing over at the young/old woman with the same level of respect and friendliness.


YO-YO

(to Jesminder) Same to you, Bosso.


YO-YO

(Bubble 2; reacting to Panel 4, Bubble 2) Same gleam of fortune that got us into the door before.

Page 261


Panel 1: Wider shot of a 3-D holographic display of a screenshot of the Assistant's laptop screen. You can see a couple of rows of files to the right of the screen.


Caption

(Cont., Yo-Yo)

"Thanks to a tracker I was able to slip onto their software into the Assistant's laptop, I can keep tabs on any information Walsh gets just as he gets it."


Panel 2: Slight close-up on the bottom row of files on the homescreen. One of those files reads- "Road to Nuevo Roma."


Caption

(Cont., Yo-Yo)

"Including a pretty full, top to bottom history behind Nuevo Roma."


Caption

(Jesminder)

"All without Walsh's security detail wiping it? Impressive!"


Caption

(Yo-Yo)

"Not the first time I've had to ride incognito on someone else's laptop."


Panel 3: A two-part set of panels that focuses on Ms. Borah examining a selection of the files that Yo-Yo accesses.


JESMINDER

(excited) There's enough here to get us inside. Even enough to slip to the press to--


Panel 4: In the second part, there's one part of the information that causes her a great deal of sadness and worry.


JESMINDER

(Cont.) No. Oh no no no...


Panel 5: Action shot of her moving away toward a different part of the room; the 3-D image in the foreground disappeared. You can see the other women looking on with worry, including Winnie who moves to meet her in the background.


YO-YO

(from the screen) Bosso...?


AMELIA

What is it?


Panel 6: We move to a close-up of Ms. Letesha a split second later, standing right in front of Jes who is visible from the back in the left corner foreground of the panel.


WINNIE

(putting on a calm face, to Jesminder) I know an "Oh, shit!" face when I see it. How bad is it?


Panel 7: Cut to a close-up of Jes' face responding to her question a beat later.


JESMINDER

I think there's gonna be an attack connected to this unveiling somehow.

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