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The Community, Issue 12: Part 2.1

Page 291 Panel 1: We move to a shot of Ms. Borah straining to keep the energy bubble; her left hand catching Prime's head as it drops in the middle of the palm.


JESMINDER

(impressed, to Winnie) Well played, Winnie! Wasn't sure that would work.


Panel 2: Cut to Winnie bobbing along the water a handful of feet away; her hair slightly mussed up by the black spray of the punch.


WINNIE

(smiles, to Jesminder) Thanks- partly right there with ya. What are we gonna do about the head?


Panel 3: A two-part set of panels that starts with Jes hucking the destroyed cyborg deep into space as she ponders the question to herself.


JESMINDER

Good question...part of me would love to open a portal to the other side of the universe and leave it there.


Panel 4: In the second part, as the energy ball zips quickly out of view, an idea pops into her head.


JESMINDER

(Cont.) But it's possible Prime-y could have some useful info about where our friends are--


PRIME

(scoffs, to Jesminder) Your friends are most likely dead as we speak.


Panel 5: Slight close-up on the two of them a moment later. She glances at the cyborg's head with a held together angry death glare in her eyes.


JESMINDER

(to Prime) You have seconds to elaborate or say hello to one of Pluto's moons.


PRIME

(evil grin) The one who pretends she's a superhero, Celia, was captured and bound in one of our subterranean cells.


JESMINDER

(Bubble 2) What of Amelia?


Panel 6: A 3-D image pops up from his cyborg's eyes, consisting of Celia unconscious and in chains. You can see Jes in the background seeing it all unfold.


PRIME

(Off-Panel) She's being pursued by one of our officers. Though her lack of powers would dictate that would be a temporary designation.


JESMINDER

(scoffs) You obviously haven't seen her in a scrap.

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Panel 1: We move to a shot of the young woman hiding in a building a short time later, fiddling around with a smartphone in order to get a lock on the holding facility.

Caption

(Cont., Jesminder)

"She's like a mini Batman. The moment you think you beat her is the moment you probably won't."


Panel 2: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. She groans in frustration at the lack of success on the endeavor.


AMELIA

Dammit...! No sign of where they took Cee.


Panel 3: A couple of seconds later, an idea pops into her head along with a hopeful smile.


AMELIA

(Cont.) On the plus side, I was still about to save a little bit of data from the car about their power center.


Panel 4: She raises the phone a little higher and starts typing into the touchpad keyboard; a rush of hopeful energy fueling her actions.


AMELIA

(Cont.) All I need is a little assistance from couple of cell phone towers nearby to help loosen up the rest of the data--


Panel 5: A short time later, we see a friendly ping emanating from the phone's speaker.


AMELIA

(wide grin) Got it!


Panel 6: Cut to a screenshot of the phone, highlighting a little red dot on a building in the northern area of the map.


AMELIA

(Off-Panel) Hmmm...not that far off, thankfully.


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