The Community, Issue 4: Part 4.1

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Panel 1: Action shot of Winnie a couple of moments later, walking over and grabbing a broom to sweep up the mess.

WINNIE

(thought bubble) Probably just adrenaline from that stupid motorcycle outside. Why men want to rev them as loud as they can in the middle of...

Panel 2: Before she could finish the rest of her statement, a sharp pain through the top half of her body. You can see, for the first time, lean muscles on her body.

WINNIE

(Cont., pained) AAGGGHH! Really, 2020? Fuhhh....king really?!

Panel 3: A two-part set of panels that starts out with the young woman straightening herself back out a few moments. Unbeknownst to her, there's the sound of a subtle "PING!" on the floor.

Panel 4: In the second part, a short time after Winnie is upright again, she notices the mystery person standing in front of them. Though you can see by the look on her face the mystery person isn't a mystery to her.

WINNIE

(transfixed, mouth agape) You again...You the one causing this jabbing pain everywhere? I thought you were just in my head.

Panel 5: Cut to a shot of the woman of steel we saw a few pages ago standing with the couch behind her. She's wearing the same dress as before, with the same half-grin on her face.

WINNIE

(Cont., Off-Panel) Wait, did you magically just pop out of my head? I have so many questions...

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Panel 1: A side shot encompassing both of them; Winnie standing to the right, and the woman of steel moving toward her from the left.

WINNIE

(increasingly excited/curious, to the woman of steel) Do you have a name? Where did you come from? Are you an alien? Did you give me these powers? If so, for what purp...

Panel 2: Slight close-up on the two of them moments later. The WoS raises her forefinger to her mouth in a shushing position; the sound seemingly calming the young human woman down for the first time in the scene.

WINNIE

(instantly zen)

Ohhhh....

(thought bubble) That felt amazing! Almost...no way a human could pull off something like that.

WOMAN OF STEEL

(to Winnie)

Don't lose yourself in the "How" or "Why."

Panel 3: Ever closer, moments later, we see the WoS moving in for a simple kiss of Winnie's waiting lips; the last bit of the powerful being's explanation hanging in the air. You can see the room around them start to shift to one big blur.

WOMAN OF STEEL

Focus on the "Now" and the power that comes with it.

Panel 4: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A second later, the two of them share a sweet and simple kiss that roars through Winnie like a bolt of lightning as the room fully disappears in a blur of speed.

WINNIE

(thought bubble)

Ahhh.....

Panel 5: Same setting as the previous panel; the layout widening a beat later with the WoS disappearing suddenly from view. Winnie tilts her head skyward, letting out a scream with a touch of the rhythmic to it.

WINNIE

(Cont., verbally)

AHHHH!!

NEIGHBOR

(Off-Panel, from the top of the panel view; angry)

Shut the hell up down there!

Panel 6: Action shot of her a few moments later, tumbling down to the ground in a moment of peace both in mind and body. You can see the living room in the background suddenly turned into a massive mess as a result of what happened in the previous two panels.