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The Community, Issue 8: Part 2.1

  • judeba
  • Mar 10, 2021
  • 2 min read

Page 188 Panel 1: Same setting/layout as Panel 5 of the previous page. Lynn has her phone out, scanning her phone's translation app for the meaning of "atraente;" Seanna glancing at the screen curiously themselves. You can see an aroused smile come across her face; the backseat long empty at this point.


LYNN

(learning) Huh...cool!


Panel 2: Action shot of the cyborg and Celia; their fists locked in a bit of a tug-of-war that's lasted for a short while.


Panel 3: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A few moments later, the machine is swept up by the quick whoosh of Winnie coming in from off-panel left.


Panel 4: Jesminder floats in to the area for the team-up maneuver; her hands glowing with purple energy. You can see her gaze shifting to the left in Ms. Letesha's direction as she speaks.


JESMINDER

And now to close the innings...!​


Panel 5: Same setting/layout as the previous panel. A powerful flare shoots from the bottom of the panel, striking the young/old woman in the abdomen and sending her flying backward.


Panel 6: Resting against a wall many feet away, clutching her stomach, Ms. Gupta has a bright idea pop into her head.


JESMINDER

(to Seanna, searching for the name) Lynn's friend...what was your name again?

Page 189


Panel 1: Seanna sticks their head out of the driver's side door, looking over at Ms. Gupta's direction. You can see the cyborg in the background lumbering slowly toward them; Winnie and Celia doing the grunt work to keep it at bay.


SEANNA

(to Jesminder) Seanna.


SEANNA

(Bubble 2; reacting to Panel 2, Bubble 1) Yeah. Not really sure how I could help you...


Panel 2: Action shot that moves back to Jes a beat after the end of the previous page; the setting and layout also similar to said panel.


JESMINDER

(remembering nod, to Seanna) Right, Seanna. Think I might need an assist here. You said you did creation magic.


Panel 3: Same setting/layout as Panel 1. Watkins flashes a sudden realization to what she's referring to.


SEANNA

(excited by the idea)

...O-kay! This could be fun.


Panel 4: We move to a slight close-up of the young person moments later, looking at the cyborg with a considerably higher amount of anxiety in their eyes compared to the previous panel.


SEANNA

(Cont., thought bubble) If I don't become flank steak first.​


Panel 5: A two-part set of panels that moves on a shot from the front windshield of the cyborg fight.


SEANNA

(Off-Panel) Please work, please work, please work...


Panel 6: In the second part, the pavement underneath the robot turns into a gloopy kind of quicksand dragging it down just above the knees.

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