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The Community, Issue 8: Part 4.1

Page 200 Panel 1: Ms. Letesha shakes her head at the question, flashing a touch of reassurance to her new friend; her hands gripping both sides of the hamburger as she speaks.


WINNIE

(to Celia) Not at all​. I figured you were holding a little secret, but I figured it was your tryst with the buff American, Lynn.


Panel 2: Connected to the same general setting, we see Jesminder nodding in agreement to Winnie's idea; her left hand gripping the side of her drink cup.


JESMINDER

(chiming in, to Celia) Speaking of that fairly open secret: I saw you and her yesterday...


Panel 3: We move back to Celia in the same position in the room she was in in the previous page, glancing down at the ground. You can see the awkward blush on her cheeks has increased compared to the Vale mine story recollection.


JESMINDER

(Cont., Off-Panel) Are you two officially an item now?


CELIA

Umm....


Panel 4: Marta notices the look on her old friend's face back in the kitchen, noticing what it means straight away; her right hand lifting the last plate of food destined for Jesminder.


MARTA

(to the group) That's a yes! Or possibly a "yes, and shut up."


Panel 5: Same setting/layout as Panel 3. Celia chuckles and rolls her eyes, lifting the beer bottle up for another swig.


CELIA

This is like high school all over again, but without the macho dicks.


CELIA

(Bubble 2; reacting to Panel 6, Bubble 1) Agreed!


Panel 6: Back to a shot of Jesminder; the same setting/layout as Panel 3. After taking a swig of her own, she lowers the cup back onto the tabletop as she speaks.


JESMINDER

(at ease, to everyone)

I didn't know how much we needed a beat to relax till just now, talking about low-stakes stuff.

Page 201


Panel 1: Cut to a shot of the militia members, driving a convoy of trucks on a highway to a heretofore unknown destination.


Caption

(Cont., Celia)

"Gods know how long it'll last though!"


Panel 2: Action shot of the cars parking in position in front of some type of large medical campus. You can see some of the people in the back who already parked starting to exit.


Panel 3: The militia members break off into separate groups- some manning the car barrier, and others in the background break for the entrance. You can see faintly a series of right wing memes deriding big government, socialism, and the like.


Panel 4: A firefight emerges a short time later between said members and policemen; the thirtysomething man is able to squeeze through the bullets somehow. As before, more of the memes are faintly visible in the background.


Panel 5: We follow the young man as he barges inside the building, taking out a couple of the officers stationed in that area. As before, more of the right wing memes faintly pop up in the background.


Panel 6: Moments later, he's shot by an errant bullet from off-panel left fired by one of the wounded officers with as much power as they could muster. In the background, just like before, the memes faintly flash through.

Caption

(Data Box)

"Phase 1 Complete- 100% Success Rate."

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